Showing posts with label critique. Show all posts
Showing posts with label critique. Show all posts

Monday, October 19, 2009

reflecting on found object sculptures

i began with this sculpture by really just looking at the materials i had and seeing that many of them were circles. there really wasn't something specifically that my sculpture was supposed to look like, it was more of an abstract thing. there also wasn't one thing in particular that inspired me to start this sculpture it was really seeing all of my objects next to each other. i just really liked how all the different colors and sizes of the circles looked together and thats really how it started to come about. my didn't really completely meet all the expectations because it doesn't really look like anything recognizable. i think it is still an interesting sculpture made of found objects even if it really doesn't resemble anything. i could have made it so it looks like something but then it wouldn't have ended being the same type of thing.

Monday, October 5, 2009

reflecting on my first critique

the critique i got was that i should add more color and more lines to my drawing, but almost everyone in my group got what was drawing was supposed to show(which was people watching war happening and not doing anything about it). it felt fine to get critique from my classmates because they were very conscious about how they critiqued my drawing and were sure not to be mean about it, but they still gave me critique that i could use to improve my drawing with.