the skeleton on the top of the bed was the only thing that kind of looked like the real painting and the back round clouds looked like the painting too, sort of.
What was missed? What parts did they not get and why?
the way the bad is sort of like a bunk bed didn't make it into the drawing and the lady sleeping in the bottom part of the bed. those things probably didn't make it into the painting because i wasn't descriptive enough or i didn't choose the right words to describe what was going on.
What would you do differently if you were to do this activity again?
What would you do differently if you were to do this activity again?
i would be more desciptive and make sure to go into detail about everything in the painting and what view the painting is being drawn from.
great point about the view. so important. how would you have used more detail? compared things? what?
ReplyDeleteya. i would have used better comparisons and been more specific about where things should go and in what direction it should be going.
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